Writing Focus 2

Sunday, May 20, 2007

I think the lesson today is on using examples in writing, but I'm really going to focus on what I expect on rewrites. I'm going to give them a short passage that a student wrote and give it to all the students. Then I'm going to rewrite it on the bored and then get them to rewrite their's too. This should take like 30 minutes so, I'm going ot have to watch my time.

I'm thinking I should use Michael's essay, since he only turned in half a page and made me so angry that I wanted to use his essay as toliet paper, but I think that'll send out the wrong message. I'm going to pick an average essay as an example.

Dan

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